Two new iterations one less color and a bunch of resizing later, i still feel they're a bit stage play like but at the same time they're for a drive in theater, so it's a venue I'm still not to clear on.
You've got a really great opportunity to use the handle as part of your text. The slight curve lends itself to it and it will make the poster feel more integrated. I think it feels like a theater poster because your butterfly axe looks too precious and special when it's centered with so much white space around it. Try it at different angles, try it as part of the typography. It's definitely an interesting image and a nice improvement on last week.
You've got a really great opportunity to use the handle as part of your text. The slight curve lends itself to it and it will make the poster feel more integrated. I think it feels like a theater poster because your butterfly axe looks too precious and special when it's centered with so much white space around it. Try it at different angles, try it as part of the typography. It's definitely an interesting image and a nice improvement on last week.
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ReplyDeleteI still feel that the axe could interact with your title here, as I said before.
Ann's suggestion to use the handle as part of your title is also sound.
This keeps improving. Don't give up!