Should the crown and guitar be white instead of red for contrast?
Watch your space between dawn and film festival, think there's an extra character return there.
Should the secondary info be lifted so the last line's baseline matches the bottom of the x so that your info isn't running off the page?
Or should it sit below the title, with the top line just below the bottom of the glasses, or the bottom line at the peak of the bottom part of the x to match the title?
I think making the crown and guitar white would give them a little too much hierarchy. There is some reward in finding them after looking at the poster for a moment.
The x, the main image, the title, those all deserve the immediate attention they are commanding right now.
I like how this is turning out, I'm interested in how the crown and guitar somewhat make horns. it could be a good or bad thing, but it's an interesting element. I think the secondary information would look better left justified with the last line rag right and sat right underneath six string samurai.
Oh my, look at this.
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Watch your space between dawn and film festival, think there's an extra character return there.
Should the secondary info be lifted so the last line's baseline matches the bottom of the x so that your info isn't running off the page?
Or should it sit below the title, with the top line just below the bottom of the glasses, or the bottom line at the peak of the bottom part of the x to match the title?
I miss the sword and metal guitar, btw.
Nice perseverance!
I think making the crown and guitar white would give them a little too much hierarchy. There is some reward in finding them after looking at the poster for a moment.
ReplyDeleteThe x, the main image, the title, those all deserve the immediate attention they are commanding right now.
maybe place the crown and guitar on his eyes looney tunes style? That might be ridiculous...
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ReplyDeleteI like how this is turning out, I'm interested in how the crown and guitar somewhat make horns. it could be a good or bad thing, but it's an interesting element. I think the secondary information would look better left justified with the last line rag right and sat right underneath six string samurai.
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