I'm loving the colors in this now. I think it makes the poster so much stronger with the white. Also, props on the slashed type...very subtle yet effective.
The hair makes more sense/is less afro-like.I didn't think it needed too many changes but it seems immensely improved.
The change in your typography and your placement of it compared to what you hung last week is wonderful. This is really working!
I'm loving the colors in this now. I think it makes the poster so much stronger with the white. Also, props on the slashed type...very subtle yet effective.
ReplyDeleteThe hair makes more sense/is less afro-like.
ReplyDeleteI didn't think it needed too many changes but it seems immensely improved.
The change in your typography and your placement of it compared to what you hung last week is wonderful. This is really working!
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