Great visual direction. How can these work as category headers?
If you set a style, sideview, for instance, stick with it. Tractor is awesome, forklift would be great in that view as well to reinforce visual consistency.
The depth added by your use of line (tractor tires, etc.) is really nice. Can this be taken further, but not too far?
Objects here are working stronger than your people (homeless hug, which I love the idea and context of this).
Really nice work so far, pull these together so they make sense in your data set.
I like the idea of giving your sister music, can this be made so it relates better to how you handled the other objects?
Overall I'm definitely reading these as a cohesive set. The line work on all the tires carries through and looks sharp. I had a hard time recognizing what was going on with the homeless man and then the music share. At first I thought the music was on a bottle. Is there a different way to visualize an exchange? Perhaps between two people, instead of through an object?
Great visual direction. How can these work as category headers?
ReplyDeleteIf you set a style, sideview, for instance, stick with it. Tractor is awesome, forklift would be great in that view as well to reinforce visual consistency.
The depth added by your use of line (tractor tires, etc.) is really nice. Can this be taken further, but not too far?
Objects here are working stronger than your people (homeless hug, which I love the idea and context of this).
Really nice work so far, pull these together so they make sense in your data set.
I like the idea of giving your sister music, can this be made so it relates better to how you handled the other objects?
Overall I'm definitely reading these as a cohesive set. The line work on all the tires carries through and looks sharp. I had a hard time recognizing what was going on with the homeless man and then the music share. At first I thought the music was on a bottle. Is there a different way to visualize an exchange? Perhaps between two people, instead of through an object?
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