The new type and radar lines aren't working as well. I think the crop of the body has gone too far, and has lost its impact and recognition as female form.
The type/linework on your last version was really pretty nice, and I think it's much more successful than this direction. The shakiness of the linework and its weight was nicely resolved.
Color choices and the dog are working well together. I like Ryan's suggestion to bring back the original crop of the woman and the lighter line radar work, but maybe combine it with this more readable text.
Color and dog image are working really well.
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The type/linework on your last version was really pretty nice, and I think it's much more successful than this direction. The shakiness of the linework and its weight was nicely resolved.
Could you post the last version for comparison?
Color choices and the dog are working well together. I like Ryan's suggestion to bring back the original crop of the woman and the lighter line radar work, but maybe combine it with this more readable text.
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