Images are fine when they are clicked on. Not sure why.
Watch your hierarchy in your solution. The supporting info and the slogan are exactly the same, and it makes the hierarchy seem unclear.
The use of the slogan does not add much to the overall solution. I think the images are fine, but the location makes them feel very static instead of active, and utilizing an angle could resolve this. This is especially true of the chainsaw, which could really be the anchor of your concept, but it's lost at the bottom of your poster.
In the second solution, the location info is very tight to the right margin, and feels uncomfortably close to the edge.
With only the elements on poster 2, you could have a very strong solution, think of how the chainsaw and type could interact to push this forward.
hey guys!I'm sorry my images are so blurry... I'm not sure why. Anyway, I would appreciate any feedback
Images are fine when they are clicked on. Not sure why.
ReplyDeleteWatch your hierarchy in your solution. The supporting info and the slogan are exactly the same, and it makes the hierarchy seem unclear.
The use of the slogan does not add much to the overall solution. I think the images are fine, but the location makes them feel very static instead of active, and utilizing an angle could resolve this. This is especially true of the chainsaw, which could really be the anchor of your concept, but it's lost at the bottom of your poster.
In the second solution, the location info is very tight to the right margin, and feels uncomfortably close to the edge.
With only the elements on poster 2, you could have a very strong solution, think of how the chainsaw and type could interact to push this forward.
just a small note, the times are backwards, it says it starts at 9am and ends at 10pm which isn't dusk till dawn.
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