Your laptop with the email is working really, really nicely. I also like the way you represent people in the social networking pictogram. Can you make these two different approaches sit together visually?
I think your bottom row is less successful right now. Be consistent, and reinforce what's working well. I think the music picto is not working as well as the social networking people. How can they relate better to one another?
I think one way to create the appearance of a family set is taking into consideration the color value. The computer has a lot of black, what if your network of people were filled in rather than just outlined?
Also, the perspective on the ipod guy is throwing me off, having the flat body, dimensional head and such active earbud cords is a hard jump for me to make visually.
The convenience of technology; social networking; email; music (ipod); texting; movies
Your laptop with the email is working really, really nicely. I also like the way you represent people in the social networking pictogram. Can you make these two different approaches sit together visually?
ReplyDeleteI think your bottom row is less successful right now. Be consistent, and reinforce what's working well. I think the music picto is not working as well as the social networking people. How can they relate better to one another?
I think one way to create the appearance of a family set is taking into consideration the color value. The computer has a lot of black, what if your network of people were filled in rather than just outlined?
ReplyDeleteAlso, the perspective on the ipod guy is throwing me off, having the flat body, dimensional head and such active earbud cords is a hard jump for me to make visually.