Tuesday, October 13, 2009

another revision



another revision, not sure what I should do for a background color

2 comments:

  1. Much better.

    How do you plan to print this? You could actually print red and black on a yellow paper, or even a really light grey. You'd probably have to screenprint it to get the yellow to work, though.

    As it is, the red and yellow is really nice on the white background for contrast.

    Secondary and tertiary info is much better resolved.

    Nice job.

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  2. I would really like to screen print this for thursday but definitely don't have the time to. I was thinking that an inkjet on white might look too bland, but it might the option for thursday.

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