This is my newest version. I still need clean up some of the edges and maybe redo handwritten quote so that it's a little neater. I think in general though this one is more interesting with the second halftone in the background. Does anyone disagree?
I agree, this one is getting more interesting, and your blood dripping into the letters look better. I would say, make the type at the top fit the rest of the poster better. You are really getting there with this one. Possibly hand write the type at the top as well to make it fit?
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ReplyDeleteI'd consider drawing the red into the slogan to reinforce the murderous aspect of the film.
BG image works great. It's a really strong addition to your composition, and adds nice visual interest.
I'd watch the blood in the lower right, it should probably drip instead of smear.
Should the figures in the bulb flip to the right so that are running from the new bg image?
Biggest issue is the festival info, it's not integrated now. I'd look at running it as a line at the bottom, instead of the top. You might shrink the main image and title 10% to give just a little more room at the bottom of the composition.
Way to keep pushing this!
One more thing: Can the the blood running onto the title be simplified? Think about how it would flow downwards, maybe the 2 parallel streams are a little too much? Perhaps just the one on the right?
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