The display type is a little difficult to read. Perhaps your could print it on orange paper and change the color of the display type to something that would make it pop more.
I think the hammer and the butterfly has improved a lot.
one of the suggestions i've also recieved is to move the axe (it is an axe james) and type away from each other, possibly making both smaller or just one. what do you folks think? Yay or nay?
The scale of the title type feels a bit too large in the context of the rest of the composition.
The axe/butterfly is improved, and I wonder what would happen if you made it more "active" (change the scale, embed it in the title at an angle to reinforce that it's an axe, etc.)
Still feel the secondary type isn't working as well as it could. Too much of a cliche, and difficult to read at that scale.
Josh,
ReplyDeleteThe display type is a little difficult to read.
Perhaps your could print it on orange paper and change the color of the display type to something that would make it pop more.
I think the hammer and the butterfly has improved a lot.
one of the suggestions i've also recieved is to move the axe (it is an axe james) and type away from each other, possibly making both smaller or just one. what do you folks think? Yay or nay?
ReplyDeleteThe scale of the title type feels a bit too large in the context of the rest of the composition.
ReplyDeleteThe axe/butterfly is improved, and I wonder what would happen if you made it more "active" (change the scale, embed it in the title at an angle to reinforce that it's an axe, etc.)
Still feel the secondary type isn't working as well as it could. Too much of a cliche, and difficult to read at that scale.