Tuesday, October 6, 2009




3 comments:

  1. This is a nice take on the subject matter. I'd consider putting a couple really "male" images in to balance this out, it's pretty subtle with the crops so far.

    You've edited out the face in all instances, but maybe a way to think about this is that each row of sections is part of the body, from head to feet, and this shows a mix of male/female to give it a progression.

    Maybe even left/side, right side of the body framing and moving down...could be really, really cool.

    In terms of color, what does this look like if it's pink squares on a white background? I think the contrast would really be striking.

    The type approach is interesting, and I'd play with that some more for some other options.

    Don't forget the location in your information (bengys drive-in theatre).

    Nice work so far, keep pushing the refinement!

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  2. The pink is a nice way to push the theme of the movie, but also consider your type as a way to express the female/male versus idea you've got going.

    For instance, I wonder what the title would look like with a delicate font juxtaposed with one that has heavy bold lines.

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  3. Just noticed that you've got Priscilla Queen of the "Dessert" not "Desert".

    Big difference!

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