I added the rotated figures with and added hand altered type. The poster still seems a bit too sparse. The tag line feels a bit odd as well. Any feedback would be appreciated.
Can the orange bar hold the slogan line to give it more of an anchor to the rest of your poster?
The order of your secondary/tertiary type seems arbitrary. I'd have the title first then the location.
Also, the leading in this information is extremely open and makes it feel separate instead of part of a unit of information. You're also emphasizing Bengies instead of the festival name in your hierarchy.
Look at your alignment. It's almost relation to the image, but not quite.
I added the rotated figures with and added hand altered type. The poster still seems a bit too sparse. The tag line feels a bit odd as well. Any feedback would be appreciated.
This is really, really close.
ReplyDeleteCan the orange bar hold the slogan line to give it more of an anchor to the rest of your poster?
The order of your secondary/tertiary type seems arbitrary. I'd have the title first then the location.
Also, the leading in this information is extremely open and makes it feel separate instead of part of a unit of information. You're also emphasizing Bengies instead of the festival name in your hierarchy.
Look at your alignment. It's almost relation to the image, but not quite.