I like the text position change. Creating the Text block rather than having the car break the text. I feel half and half on the hand drawn text, but I think its more that the color is similar to the car and it doesn't stand out. If it was hand-drawn and colored in a black for contrast it might be effective at Popping the title, but the title first may not be what you're looking for.
Here's my latest version with handrawn type. Last minute feedback would be great!
I like the text position change. Creating the Text block rather than having the car break the text. I feel half and half on the hand drawn text, but I think its more that the color is similar to the car and it doesn't stand out. If it was hand-drawn and colored in a black for contrast it might be effective at Popping the title, but the title first may not be what you're looking for.
ReplyDeleteI think also, there is too much space on the right hand side of "Race" so adjusting the spacing on death and race would be good :).
ReplyDeleteI'd run the title as one line, and use the green/black combo for the title, then use the black for the secondary text.
ReplyDeleteThe text box has gotten really tall, but this is a nice improvent. 2 lines, title and secondary text, running under the wheels.
Nice improvement, great color choice.