Monday, November 16, 2009

Large back panel of pamphlet

Here it is so far, feedback is really appreciated!

1 comment:

  1. This is starting to come together. The colors work well together, but I'd consider using them differently.

    What would happen if you kept the blue, and used the orange for your interjection ballons to really pop them out of your layout?

    Is this both sides? It really needs to have the pictograms implemented as well.

    Type looks a bit dry compared to the visual interest created by your photo choice. I'd pick something with a bit more life to it.

    Like the color palette, think about bringing some white space in to the data side.

    This is a start, feels like it needs more info and development. Get the pictos in and repost so you can get more feedback.

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